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The holiday season is a time of giving, but a group
of Dorchester students recently took that idea to a whole
new level. The children involved in Project D.E.E.P.
(the Dorchester Educational Enrichment Program) were asked
last month to write about what gifts they would give to the
world if they could. The students, all in grades five
through eight, proved that their youth does not make them
blind to the world's problems. Their essays showed
that they are just as thoughtful and compassionate as the
best of us.
These children might have asked for iPods or cell phones
or video games for themselves this year, but they knew that
the world needed so much more. World peace was the
most popular gift among these compositions, while many
students also gave food to the hungry, shelter to the
homeless, and money to the poor. We would all be quite lucky
if just one of these holiday wishes came true.
The three essays which were judged to be
the best appear below.
- John Hanlon, Executive Director
Project D.E.E.P.
A Cure for Cancer
By Mollie Mannion &endash; Grade 5
St. Ann's School
If I could give the world one gift this Christmas it
would be a cure for cancer. There are so many different
types of cancers that people get, and every one of us has
been touched by this illness at some point in our lives. My
gift would heal every type of cancer whether in men, women
or children. It seems like more and more families are
suffering from this disease than ever in the past, and I
wish I could do something about it.
I would give this gift of healing because cancer is a
worldwide problem. Even though we have doctors and
scientists working very hard and getting close to finding a
cure, people are still suffering and families are
heart-broken everyday from the loss of loved ones. Through
the years we have found cures and medicines for most
diseases but have still not completely wiped out cancer.
Granted survival rates have increased greatly over the past
fifty years with the help of donations to charities such as
the Jimmy Fund, but I want the whole world to be
cancer-free.
This is why the world needs my gift right away, so the
millions of people suffering right now will be cured. It
seems so simple that it is frustrating. We came up with
every type of vaccine that we receive as a baby to wipe out
other illnesses, but we cannot rid the world of cancer.
In our world, technology has advanced so much over the
years. For instance, you can now call your relatives in
Ireland from Boston at the push of a button. We can send an
instant message to our friends through the computer at the
click of a mouse. We can fly anywhere in the world on an
airplane, yet we cannot take the pain and suffering of
cancer out of a body.
Our scientists and doctors are trying everyday and there
are so many wonderful charities out there making money to
continue with the research, but I truly wish I could speed
up the process by giving the world my Christmas gift. When
it received my gift, the world would definitely be a
brighter place. So many lives would be touched. The physical
pain and suffering of the men, women and children would be
taken away along with the emotional suffering of the family
and friends there to support them. Children would keep their
moms, dads, aunts, uncles, nanas and grandpas around a lot
longer. Without this illness families would be happier, and
I think that would make the whole world happier, so I wish I
could give this gift.
The Gift of Education
By Gabe Edelman - Grade 5
Neighborhood House Charter School
In the U.S. and the rest of the world many families
suffer greatly due to a lack of education. In the world
today 275 million never attended or completed a primary
school education. Roughly 870 million adults in the world
are illiterate. I would give the world the gift of education
this holiday season because there would be far less poverty,
better job opportunities, and major advances in the medical
and technological fields. Education goes beyond the borders
of school and helps to achieve peace, justice and
equality.
With the gift of education this holiday season, the
number of impoverished families would greatly decrease. By
granting people the gift of equal education, everyone would
be able to succeed enough to provide for his or her family's
needs. People who are poor often do not have the money they
need to obtain an education. Impoverished people are often
illiterate; therefore, they cannot obtain the middle-class
jobs that would help to support their family. Education
alone would help to provide the basic needs to succeed,
better living standards, and a brighter future for the poor
and the illiterate.
Education would provide people with the tools to have
equal opportunities. Statistics prove that people with
better educations make far more money throughout their
lives. People who graduate college make on average a million
dollars more than people who do not graduate college. Equal
job opportunities would help to abolish such a vast range in
the social classes. The rich would not be filthy rich, and
the poor would not be dirt poor.
The more educated people are, the more chances there
would be to have major medical and technological
breakthroughs. With more people educated more people would
be able to become doctors. Those doctors would be able to
find cures for currently incurable diseases, such as cancer
or AIDS. Technological advances could be made that would
help to provide better living standards. Education would not
only help to provide better lives, but it would help to save
lives.
The world needs the gift of education because it would
make the world a better place for everyone. Education has no
downside, only positive outcomes. Education would provide
equal opportunities, help to diminish poverty, and make
advancements in the medical and technological fields. The
world would be smarter, more equal, and have all-around
better living conditions with the gift of education.
My Gift of Peace
By Michela Juliano - Grade 6
St. Ann's School
The gift I would like to give the world this holiday
season, if I could, would be the gift of peace. The world we
live in today is a scary, sad place for many people. For
example, the war in Iraq affects both people in the Middle
East and us at home in America. The Iraqi civilians live
with soldiers carrying guns around them everyday. They see
loved ones dying right in front of them, while here in
America, we are losing sons, daughters, fathers, mothers,
brothers and sisters to the war.
The world needs my gift of peace so that people can live
their everyday lives without being in fear of dying
themselves or losing someone they love. The world needs
peace so that civilians and government officials can use
their talents to work on important things, like medical
research and solving world hunger.
If I could give the gift of peace to this world, people
of all religions could learn from one another. No one
religion would feel threatened by the ideas and beliefs of
the other. No one group would feel they need to impose their
own religious values on another group. With the gift of
peace everyone would respect each other and how they choose
to live.
If the world would choose to accept my gift of peace it
would be a happier place to live for me and others all over
the world. People could go to sleep at night without
worrying that their home will be bombed or wondering if
their loved ones, serving in the military, are safe.
Scientists would be discovering a cure for cancer rather
than a new nuclear bomb. Others would be figuring out ways
to make sure people starving in Africa had enough food to
eat rather than planning how to bomb or poison the countries
they hate.
I would give the world the gift of peace, if I could, so
that my family and every family, all over the world, could
live in harmony. Every country could work together to help
solve problems all over the world. Then our generation, and
the many generations to come after us, would have peaceful,
happier lives.
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